Factual Claim – Since Nebraska Medicine and the University of Nebraska Medical Center (UNMC) took care of the treatment of three patients with Ebola in 2014, they have driven the world in treatment, preparing and isolate techniques for exceptionally irresistible viruses (Nebraska Medicine).
Value Claim -There is no better spot for our kindred Americans to be, according to Nebraska Medicine. Although, specialists are concerned in light of the fact that they don’t have total data on how the coronavirus virus acts and the full range of ailments (Nebraska Medicine).
Benefit Claim – UNMC is spearheading their medical advancements, evolving at a rapid speed. Because of their movement in urging to bring Americans back home shows Nebraska hospitality. Nebraska is the home of helping your neighbor and the Nebraska National Guard and Nebraska Medicine/UNMC represented that when they stepped up to provide for their fellow Americans (Nebraska Medicine).
A good listing of claims here – but what is your central argument? What is it that you are trying to persuade people to do? To believe? To act? That’s the central element of an editorial – to persuade your reader to adopt a policy.
i.e. Nebraska should be recognized as a hub for treating emergent diseases.
or Patients quarantined in Nebraska should not be forced to buy their own airline tickets home after their confinement is over.
The issue is – What is your central argument? And how do you support it?
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I liked your claims where you mentioned Nebraska is the home of helping your neighbor. I feel like that is an important trait of Nebraska. What’s your call for action? Why is Nebraska the best spot for treating these outbreaks and not a different state?
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